View Full Version : LegoMyEggoz's trailer..
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 03:23 PM
Yup, so heres my trailer.. its basically an introduction to gunz.. :D hope you like it!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQeP2OholI4
Please Tell Me Good Points and bad ones..(pros and cons) :) thank you,,
btw took me 3 hours to make...(messed up)(took a lot of time looking for stuff)
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 03:54 PM
hello?! anybody here?
xArmani
06-13-2008, 03:57 PM
not bad
i thought the preview of the TDM was quite long
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 04:02 PM
thanks armani.. well for like 40 mins + i tried to get good footage of TDM, but unforunatey, couldnt :P
thanks for reply though.. helps me a lot
Maybe even future videos :D
Jordan...
06-13-2008, 04:17 PM
thats good,better quality on upload hopefully?
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 04:21 PM
thanks jordan, but u can prses WATCH IN HIGH QUALITY..on youtube :D..
sorry bad quality, blame fraps and my lazyiness to go search/buy new gamerecorder
Achmed
06-13-2008, 04:35 PM
F-F-F-Failure. Didn't even remove the interface in the replay. No editing other than transitions. The text didnt need to last so long, i had read through it bout 5 secs before it ended. No gun sounds. It didnt really make me want to play at all, infact it lead me to believe runescape would prolly be a better option.
Luxtr
06-13-2008, 05:20 PM
The thing about this is...
instead of flashing so much text at once, you should have it blast out single words or phrases for stronger emphasis/effect. Also, as achmed said, the interface has to be taken out. Try incorporating angles that are not at the back of the character, for example from ground up, etc.
Gamermatt2
06-13-2008, 05:21 PM
5/5 ftw :D
Ceb£ruS
06-13-2008, 05:29 PM
my personal opinion:the music should have started from the beginning
i give it a 7/10
Murder
06-13-2008, 06:01 PM
To many words... Makes gunz sound like hooked on phoenix D=
I don't want to play hooked on phoenix..
OMFG what's that again?
raiden33
06-13-2008, 06:04 PM
k im going to give some critizm so u can inprove it ( not to say ur trailer is crap cause it isnt)
- first off do something better with the text. it was too plain and in the way of the video most the time. also no one has enough time to read and watch the different gunz that fast. (as murder said 'too much words')
- needs some examples of clan war and how its set up.
- use different clothing for every time u start filming (and different gender too) cause all it looked at was the same guy character and gear most the film.
thats all for now i guess it still seemed kinda short and rushed.
frogger
06-13-2008, 06:35 PM
To many words... Makes gunz sound like hooked on phoenix D=
I don't want to play hooked on phoenix..
OMFG what's that again?
agree too many words show more gameplay ownage
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 06:41 PM
ok thanks.. guys.. uthink i can change it?
frogger
06-13-2008, 06:42 PM
ok thanks.. guys.. uthink i can change it?
if you didnt already sumbit it i would change it if i were you (it looks like an infomercial)
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 06:46 PM
not change it, but like do better next time :D
Legomyeggoz
06-13-2008, 08:49 PM
any morre comments??
Legomyeggoz
06-14-2008, 12:03 AM
hello? anymore comments?
woodsprite
06-14-2008, 01:38 AM
hmmm choose dif music it doesnt rlly fit the movie and mayb some special effects when displaying the text...
Legomyeggoz
06-14-2008, 04:28 PM
sorry wood, my first video, never really use wmm,:P
skeetskeet
06-14-2008, 04:50 PM
Thats a pretty good one.. I liked it.
What programs did you use to make it?
cRiSsI
06-14-2008, 04:58 PM
I made a trailer but unfortunately it was way too big to upload on Youtube because I used Adobe After Effects which is a 'pro' software and therefore generate big video files.. Might try again using Windows movie maker or something like that :S
Anyway..
You're video is not bad at all.. the graphics aren't really good but that's Youtube.. 8/10
vex06
06-14-2008, 05:47 PM
Its ok but you didn't really engage anyone it was always shooting. You should have promoted Gladiator matches in that trailer and dare i say......d style?
Legomyeggoz
06-14-2008, 11:45 PM
OMG thanks guys!! so many good comments! THANKS!!!!
sk8withguns
06-14-2008, 11:56 PM
It was pretty good, Way better then Devilitos! I reped you, rep me back XD.
vex06
06-15-2008, 10:07 AM
Yeah thats true, it was way better than Devilito's and it did have nice flow and rythm to it and i would vote for you if it got into the final choices :D
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 12:36 PM
thanks guys!! so damn nice of you <3!!
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 05:33 PM
watch my video and rate guys :D!
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 05:36 PM
any more comments/views/suggestions? :D
cRiSsI
06-15-2008, 05:51 PM
Triple post o0
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 06:40 PM
no one commenting...:P i need suggestion!!
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 07:56 PM
HELLO? anybody here?? o.O!
cRiSsI
06-15-2008, 08:35 PM
ZOMG! Triple post and then double post. You're doing good :)
pie108
06-15-2008, 08:47 PM
(RAWR) My favorite part: When you said "Challenge Yourself" Thats the key point of GunZ. (RAWR)
Legomyeggoz
06-15-2008, 08:50 PM
lol thanks a lot pie :), u gonna make video submission? u really made me feel more confident :D! THANKS! +rep
Legomyeggoz
06-16-2008, 02:42 PM
any more comments/ suggestion?
I only suggest on part of the vid its about at 0:20 sec where the nades hits the ground donut formed shape. maybe its a bang effect i dunno but i kinda think you should either let it out or replace it with something else. The white letters are just the right size to read and get ppl attention. Futher you show what kind of weps you can use and give a quick demo of some modes like tdm and dm. and show some k style moves. nothing to comment on that, GJ.
redfire66
06-16-2008, 03:53 PM
Cool! Is this your "good copy"?
You should add more stuff :P.
Eg. taunting, dagger, and yea.
But overall, its goooood. =) I would vote for it.