Timmehx0x
11-14-2008, 12:04 PM
Out of 10 please,.
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc253/Timmehx0x/tyvm.jpg
My pleasure.
The car is far too unclear. Don't know whats going on with this white lines either. The diagonal paired big ones as well as the small ones. They are really not your best options in complimenting your car. You also added a reflection on the bottom but my screen can barley pick it up and its a pretty good screen too. As for the text, I think you can do much better. You have filtered the text but you don't need to. Try black background with the car a little more elevated and maybe shrunk a little to fit into the pallet, then have a one pixel white line cross the whole pallet two thirds down. Above that line your car must fit, and below it add that reflection. Find some simple yet befitting text and you will have attained that simple yet sexy look. Oh try experimenting with the black background and adding a simple carbon fiber effect but mess with the opacity and have everything else (the car, text, that one pixel line, and reflection of the car) above both the black and carbon fiber effect. It may or may not work. Its how you use it.
5/10 - Good effort, you just need to express it properly.
camoflauge
11-14-2008, 01:12 PM
i have to say 2 out of 10